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Jeremy Redinger
Junior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 46

0 posted 2001-09-07 03:01 AM

It's been a while. A long while. Let's just say, my mind has been far from 100%, But tonight a flow coursed through my fingertips once again, and again I was able to write poetry. Back with a vengence you might say, but for how long I'm unsure. I hope for a while at least.

My demons still call me from closets beneath bridges, from behind the doors of closets. I have much to deal with yet, but at last there is a chance for me to get some of it out. So thank you for listening for my ramble:P and Enjoy this poem of mine I've written just minutes ago. Pardon any mistakes, I haven't taken the time to proofread. I'm rather... Envigorated. Thanks again, and enjoy.

I CHALLENGE LIFE
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I challenge Life,
In a world of masked illusion,
With fake visions of perception,
I challenge life to defy me.

I challenge life,
In a world untamed in shame,
With wicked shrines of uncertainty,
I defy life to grasp me.

I challenge life,
In a world of a thousand paths,
With the relics of pain and misfortune calling from all corners,
I defy life to force me.

I challenge life,
In a world of helplessness,
With the plague of ignorance and stubborness in this world,
I defy life to stop me.

I challenge life,
In a world where it's 'life' that holds us back,
With it's web of time, knowledge, and emotion...
I'll endure life's battle and become who I was meant to be.

Myself.

Jeremy Redinger

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2001-09-07 09:40 AM

Very Very Good!
~Connie~

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-09-07 10:51 AM

Keep on fighting!--This is great--

LOVE ELMO

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

3 posted 2001-09-07 01:22 PM

I too like the spirit of this piece. Life is a constant assualt on our minds, bodies, and souls. But we have to keep going.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2001-09-07 02:19 PM

I can feel your spirit, and I can see even though sometimes life does give us turmoils and we stumble that it's only through life that we begin to live, keep on writing your writing shows alot of feeling and life.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2002-11-25 06:07 PM

I like what you said here!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2002-11-28 07:58 PM

I'm very impressed

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

lil devil _69
New Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 3

7 posted 2002-11-28 09:01 PM

great

I challenge life,
In a world of a thousand paths,
With the relics of pain and misfortune calling from all corners,
I defy life to force me.

i love that part i wish others could understand what i am trying to do more than the way this phrase desribes and let me find my own way

does that make sense i hope so

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-12-18 12:32 PM

Yr well on yr way.

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