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Dream To Reality |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Dream To Reality As I sleep you come to me The dream seems real when you I see I know you yet, who are you I can smell you and feel your touch This all confuses me oh so much For your more real to me then the day I know I must be going crazed I feel that you are here to stay Past lives, preasent days Or nights is the word I should say But must I live only in my dreams Or will you apear to me in the real As I feel we need One moon lit night while driving home Quite awake and quite alone I felt your presence in the air All around me I could even smell your hair You came inside with every breath I could feel your cloak brush my neak Tho my eyes could still not see I knew that you were right here with me When home in my room I took extra care Special gown, brush strokes through my hair And as I turned there you stood As I knew someday you would The only love in your eyes Was all for me, soly mine I let my gown drop off one sholder No fear there at all, just love grown bolder As you neared, you warned and told me not But I had already given this much thought With all our pent up loving care I shared your blood, You shared mine there Passions pain shared in the night Guarded by the nights light Moon light such the Earth has never seen Each beam almost bowing to it's knee Knowing this pair would Reign in it's light For All Eternity Thank You ~~~Connie~~~ [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 09-04-2001).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Pale to Darkness all around, Sometimes it’s an action, others a sound, A pleasure to see these words written so well, Perhaps better elsewhere, only time will tell, At least, here they will now linger, Placed so soft by your finger I appreciate the style and theme, Darkness in not just a dream. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Gloom : Thank You for your beautiful words.... ~Connie~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is great, it drew me in & I couldn't turn my eyes away  LOVE ELMO |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
ELMO: Thanks very much... : ) I think it's been the moon lately ..LOL So full and beautiful... The whole Vampire thing... : ) ~Connie~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Connie..this is good. Like elmo it drew or sucked me right in. Couldn't quit reading. I think we were under the same moon. Great read alan |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Alan: Thank You for your generous words ~Connie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Beaufifully written. Haunting. Very nicely done If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Tracey: Your words mean much Thanks ~Connie~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful job...as the somewhat desperate tone within in this piece, was well expressed...enjoyed. if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Albert... Thank You kind sir.... ~Connie~ |
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