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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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The nights are so lonely The only light is the stars Everyone finds happiness Yet I just watch from afar Nothing good will come I have no destiny My past will always haunt me It will never set me free Too much has went wrong Nothing good will come Acid tears do fall Sadness is what I've won |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely dark and forlorn... and nicely done!! I think however..the sadness time will ease..and the hurts will heal.. to be replaced by new ones for sure..but we live in the spaces between them. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
You and me both. Great piece Mags!!!  G Regret not that which you have done, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
For me the only way to come out of the darkness is to let go of the old disappointments and find new dreams and desires...hope is like lighting a candle in a dark cave...suddenly everything looks clearer...James |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this was good and believeme you arent the only one. i hope you feel better about things someday |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I can relate to this--"When one door closes another one opens, often when one closes we look at it too long & don't see another that has been opened to us" It will slowly get better LOVE ELMO  |
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