Dark Poetry #3 |
death of a camel |
silent whispers Junior Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 40Alaska |
You stared into the flames to long got caught up in its sulferous power inhaled the lacy strings that bind each of us together, forever. Your life went up in a puff of smoke yellowed, ashen complexion of life never thought you'ld melt so quickly just a leftover snowball in July. Inside the light you lose its edges until pushed |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I enjoy the death of a Camel about thirty times a day. Mmmmmm....smooth! *cough* Sing while you may |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I never let my camle die, i dont know what is wrong with you ppl. but anyway, i liked this although i am not sure if it is about a person, an object, or the camel on the side of my pack of smokes. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
LOL I like this--it can be looked at different ways LOVE ELMO |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Quite thought provoking - well done!!!! I look at it emotionally though - at least leaning that way.. LOL Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Nine out of ten men who have tried camels have gone back to women. paladin |
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