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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Too big to be never to move away To stand is now too great of an effort, Never to leave his size locks him to stay And eats himself into obese comfort. His heart barely pumping loving just food Steel bars support his bulk that’s supreme, Visitors see just his jovial mood, All are gone when nightmares invades his dreams. Freedom to move freedom to leave once more Back to a childhood when he could run and play, But he can’t even go out of his door Just through the windows he looks at the Sun. Food no longer fulfilled his longing call To leave they had to remove all the wall. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah yes.... remember reading such a story... captured darkly..and well told.. although... the first line caused me pause...and after several reads..I still failed to make it work... just my opinion.. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
The 1st line confused me a lil too (too big to be, never to move away?) the rest was great though LOVE ELMO  |
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