Dark Poetry #3 |
More than words |
allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
I’m learning so much About words I never thought about Now I know what “all” means When I use it to say I think about you all the time “Wish” has a new meaning When I try to understand The strange needs I do have now Hard to accept about “fail” I do know now the pain it brings Every time I look to us What best “dream” can mean I know very well nowadays So many times I lost myself there The “woman” you are is enough Whatever I could be searching About the perfect one can be “Angel” is not what I thought it was Before heard your voice Or watch your way to be About “love” I found the worst In this forbidden game You force me to play I’m learning so much About words In the lessons your silence gives me |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very well written Words do have different meanings to different people. Nicely expressed here Mags The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else! |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very nice analogy, using your previous understanding of words compared to your new ones. Nicely writen. ~Jess |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I know that word silence...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really love this... ~Tier |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Thank you all for your nice words breaking the silence. [This message has been edited by allis4angel (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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