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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
0 posted 2001-07-31 01:04 AM

I seeked solace in the warmth
Of your swaying wings even
Though you--unknowingly expectant--chose
To fold them in behalf
Of your bethrothed.
Will I then, now lost, decide
As well to take my
Own dreams and paint them
In someone else's canvass?
Take then my crimsoned promises
And mold them as one
While the candle-lit hour slowly,
But inevitably arrives amidst my
Silent Lamentations.
© Copyright 2001 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
1 posted 2001-07-31 01:42 AM

I really loved the images and wording of this poem! enjoyed reading!

~Tier
Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
2 posted 2001-07-31 02:09 AM

Wonderful use of imagery...  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
3 posted 2001-07-31 11:34 AM

this is da shkit.../Drew/
Inanothertime
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since 2001-06-29
Posts 72
4 posted 2001-08-02 08:31 AM

Nice! rejection is never easy, but what a great way to deal with it!
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