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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-30 04:42 PM

I can't seem to see
why you don't care.
Why you're hurting me
why you're never there
why you're the only one
who ever hears me cry]
why you're the only one
who doesn't say goodbye.

It's like everytime I see you
I fall back in love again
and I want to cry
when I'm not with you
when you're not around
when you can't hear me cry
when you don't see my tears
when you don't hear me scream.

I can't seem to understand
if it'll ever be the same
and I don't want to be
the one you can rely on
the one who's always there
so if you don't do something
right this very minute
I might just not care.

I'm sitting here
about to cry
just break down
and call you
to let you know
what you do to me
why I don't know why
I even try anymore.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-30 07:29 PM

Wow I come back after a few days break and see that your still at it... the feeling is stronger evrytime you seem to type, and why am I not surprised... the emotions get stronger...

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

2 posted 2001-07-31 12:14 PM

very well spoken nick....the feelings just keep getting stronger...good write../Drew/

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

3 posted 2001-07-31 02:17 AM

Alyssa ~ Very powerful. I loved this...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-07-31 07:12 PM

This is me right now too--so i know how much u r hurting--my bf doesn't know what he wants right now, so he keeps playing with my heart, my feelings--we broke up friday the 13th & he still calls, making sure i'm not with other guyz & not partying & stuff--yet he's doing just that--anything he wants--like always--I love him soo much but i just don't know how much more my heart can take--this poem expressed my feelings perfectly--great work

LOVE ELMO <3

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

5 posted 2001-08-02 04:20 AM

This one hits home Allysa..... Trust me, nick and drew... they can tell ya... I find it hard to get rid of the person that causes these feelings, funny thing is I thynk I can't live without her... Its like I gave a bigger peice of me to her than I thought I did.. I see light in here, where there is only darkness, and this causes me even more pain... her darkness shrouds my light... Well very good write.
/dustin/

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-08-02 06:03 AM

Lots of feelings in this one...James

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

7 posted 2001-08-02 11:42 AM

Thanks ya all.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

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