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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
Dust rises, the view becomes difficult; my mind filled with confusion. I know not my dreams, I live without existing. What is to be proven in the world? But I still live, Questions fill my head; I know not what to expect. The dust settles, my mind but finds one answer: -I live for the purpose of living; I feel at peace, Words begin to flow around me; My existence becomes clear. Thanx for reading, now please express your thoughts about it.  I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
I liked it, intereting format and style, nice thought...keep it up. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
Thanx I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Jorge, I thought it was ok. Not your best work but still. Anyway you write well, still a lot of room for improvement and if you stick around here then you are bound to realize how great you can truly become.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ah....the questions that surround us in this life i see what you're going thru thanks for the read keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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