Teen Poetry #4 |
To the Reader |
Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
Shadow, Born from the moon. Twilight wanderer of the world; Everlasting darkness Pushes it's existance throughout the world Never stopping for breath Like life, which it's continous force Expels all darkness from your being Until it comes Your time of death When at last, the shadow will consume you. I hoped you like it tell me your thoughts..... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hah... a lovely summary of life. Makes me fear death more than I used to. This is a scar that may never heal. Thanks for the lasting impression. Be proud that your words can cut so deep. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done Jorge......you da man. I liked it.....you oughta come around here more.....me and felipe do.......so you should too, and if you don't then I'm not driving you to anymore parties! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
thanx for the replies I'm glad you injoyed and yes dope I will try to come and post more often and DAM YOU, don't blackmail me cuase you will keep driving me! :-þ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was very good. Very scary. but good. hope to see more. Regina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ok you two, play nice Good job on this poem, the thoughts were expressed well. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Don't worry everybody......Jorge is a pal of mine from school. He's cool.....kinda odd and has a girlfriend who could be sent to jail if she passes 3rd base with him, but hey.....hahaha YOu go boy! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
I'm glad you guys liked it and sorry if it was scary the purpose is not to scare you thanx for posting. I see the darkness coming all is bleak… |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seems like Dopey has recruited more of his friends that's really good as of the poem, you guys in PR are really good writers im very impressed "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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