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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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There's a bit of a rhyme scheme, it's not perfect, but please just think about the situation? Incase you need me I hardly even knew you Before this year You sat by me one day And it became clear Seven months later, you're one of my closest guys I talk to you and you sound so much Like my boyfriend Like me You've been depressed I've been worried Finally you told me what was wrong Bluntly and hurried You hate yourself and you've felt it so long The one girl you liked You said didn't care So who the cares about her But maybe you sensed something that wasn't there I can't believe what you said You wish you had never been born You wish you were dead You hate your life I tried but I couldn't cry I told you I cared I'd miss you if you died You said your life is living hell That really hurt I swear I couldn't tell I want to help you Anything I can do Told me you wouldn't kill yourself So let me hold that as true Things will get better I promise I've been there, am there, I know it too I'll just stay here Incase you need me here for you... -You may've noticed one like (So who the cares about her) where I left out a word, just so the moderators wouldn't mind... Okay a little info...I was talking to this person, a guyfriend, tonight. He finally told me what was wrong with him, I was totally shocked and didn't know what to say or do, so I just told him I care and I'm here. I don't know WHAT to do. He's a very secretive guy, I don't want to betray his trust.....so.....help? "And you're my obsession I love you to the bones And Ana wrecks your life Like an anorexia life" - "Ana's Song", Silverchair [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 03-10-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well the poem was pretty much a little insight as to what is going on in yer life. In PR we call it bochinche......like gossip. Anyway a bit of gossip in yer life that we know of. Thanks for sharing, but I have no clue what to say in order to be of aid. Sorry!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dopey- Gossip? Didn't know you guys wanted to know..hmm... Well, thanks anyway   Be; |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WOW!!! This poem shocked me and shaked me to the core. I have things I could say about this situation, but as for me right now I am not in my right mind so I will leave saying I hope all works out and I am moving this to the top for more people to see. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
This was really really good bel  im glad that you let that person (whoever it might be) that you would always be there... people need to know that sometimes  it was really sweet hehe! have fun and be good! ~jO  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Angel- I understand, or at least I think I do. Thanks  Ethel- Thank you much, lol, you're too funny! Bel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This person is lucky to have a friend like you. You have a beautiful heart Isabel keep it up keep sharing too "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I think the thing that is actually better than this INCREDIBLE poem is the thought and the obvious concern of a truly great friend...acire is right, this guy IS lucky...as for what you should do, I'm sorry, but I really don't know...all I can say is that just continnuing to be there for him and listening to him and letting him know you care is the best thing anyone can do for anybody. Hope all works out. May God bless you and remember to always wear your shoes on the right feet (there's gotta be some deep meaning you can get outta that...)"Don't spoons just make you smile? My friend is more of a FORK person, the butterknife makes me cry..." -Hallucinations in Blond |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Acire- Thanks, that means a lot. Kandi- Wow! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I'm trying to listen and be here and everything, but it's kinda harder than someone would think. hehe! *deep breath* Okay, well thanks. Thanks again everyone Bel |
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