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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA 
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I don't know what it is with me and 12 stanza's but things tend to turn out that way a lot! I wrote this because I sit in lunch and sometimes act like I'm talking to little people on my shoulders, and some people get REALLY freaked out by it, especially devout christians! MWAHAHA Anger take me I forsake thee Quiet voices Bring me safety Anger breeds Planting seeds Of the voices As they feed In my soul There is a hole Filled by voices As they control Voices surrounding Always resounding You’d think it’d be Quite confounding As they guide I never hide They help me see My true side Tell me what to say How to live day to day They guide me always And hold much sway Tell me who I am And about my fellow man What to do about The people I can’t stand The secrets of mankind The voices seem to find The taste more bitter Than a melon rind They do not lie They’d make you cry And laugh as You fall from the sky I must be secure If I am to endure More voices I guess I’ll have to procure Infinite voices Plenty of choices Take your pic They’re all Rolls Royces The voices do comprise Much to my surprise The joy of all my life And my ultimate demise "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is extreamly well written in my view I love it keep up the great job. Until your next poem which I hope is very soon --Linc "The goal is not allways the the reason something is done the path to get to the goal is more important." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You talk to people on yer shoulder? Dude I do it too, but they aren't on my shoulder.....in fact they aren't even people. They are gnomes......uhhhh...anyway Nicely done here, you and yer 12 verses. I think you did quite well on this one. The ryhme was wonderful and I really just liked the whole thing. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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grey::tears Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19lost within my mind |
i really liked this post, and hope to read more soon. A.K.S. "Never fear something, just because you don't understand." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Everyone talks to themselves or talks to a imaginary friend(s) it's a normal thing i guess you did a good job with your poem the 12 stanzas don't bother me thanks for the share "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Everyone talks to themselves or talks to a imaginary friend(s) it's a normal thing i guess you did a good job with your poem the 12 stanzas don't bother me thanks for the share "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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