Teen Poetry #4 |
I Was Once A Mermaid Who Ate Applesauce |
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Listen to brilliant madness streaming across the seas Praising and mourning the loss of the times that never existed at all and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow I liked this poem a lot.....and I can see the title was odd.....trying to up the Jell-o and Sex Dice title? haha......this one was VERY interesting hahaha and it just proves how messed up you are!!! *quivers in fear* Anyhow, nicely done! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, this is outstanding! Such a powerful message. I'd expect no less from you. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is really great. I like the title too.... Very nice Bel |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WOW WOW WOW WOW !!! So meaningful and powerful as well. Great job on this I liked this a very lot. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooh the title..hahaha. Now moving onto the poem. Short but sweet. Right to the point. Nicely done. ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have an attention catching title You poem is short but very meaningful just straight to the point wonderful write "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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