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Living Without |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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What once was, Has long since fled. What I really need, Is just past my grasp. The darkness looms, Another gray afternoon. Wishing to awaken, Eyes opened, and free. I now reside here, In this vacant house. A gaping hole, Has replaced my heart. So here I am, So sad to me. Living in this world, Without you. "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very to-the-point piece. Quite solemn, also. A good write. Nice to see you posting again, hon. And keep your head high, if you ever need to talk to me I'm on AIM from time to time.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is quite sad. I liked it though.....I hope you get better  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
It's all good. Kind of like a small aspect of something I've been feeling... I'm not really this sad. Kind of an embellishment on something that's happened. Anyway thanks for the replies... and Allen I forgot your IM name... so you'll have to IM me.  jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jenn, it is a rather sad poem. I hope things start to look up for you. ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's nice to know that you're actually doing better than what your poems portrays. it seemed very emotional, and it grabed my concern too. I'm glad I saw your reply...Thanks for Sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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