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lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-03-08 06:14 PM

From the moment I told you I loved you
I knew it was meant to be
There's somthing inside you
That other people can't see
There's a certian tone in your voice
Drawing me into you
And I know I'm making the right choice
If only I could see you
See that smile on your face
While you wrap your arms around me
I can't wait to be in that place
OUr love is honest and true
It'll be much better when I get to see you
We'll put the past behind us
Hold on to a new time
In your arms everything will be fine
So just keep holding on to that day
When we kiss the past away
I'm sorry things are so confusing
And I myself, am afraid
But just take a look at how close we really are
And this bond of love that we've made

Dedicated to Jermiah Peters

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-08 07:10 PM

This is sweet. What a lovely dedication.
Carpe diem.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-03-08 09:37 PM

Awwwww.....This was vewy sweet. And the cyber-flower was a very nice touch. Very strong in the sweetness factor.

~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

shortilove_03
Junior Member

since 2001-02-15

Posts 20
Arkansas, United States

3 posted 2001-03-09 12:48 PM

This was very sweet. I really liked it. =)
Shelia

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-03-09 05:57 PM

I thought this was sweet. I dazed off into a little world of mine while reading this. I was reading it as if a girl I know was saying this to me....how I wish.....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

5 posted 2001-03-09 08:24 PM

thanks for all your replies. i haven't shared this with him yet, but oh how i want to. i love this guy so much..thanks again for all your replies!

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-03-10 12:08 PM

A very sweet poem lilpoet. He should be happy with what you have written.

~AF~

"To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!"
Homer Simpson

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2001-03-10 01:18 PM

great poem chic

I haven't talked to you forever!! everything flowed so nicely and it was a great dedication..keep up the great work!!

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-03-11 09:26 PM

really sweet
Have you shown him the poem?
I suggest you do
It should sweep him off his feet
keep us posted

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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