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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Secrets Secrets hide Problems, Situations, Secrets protect Me from the world, The world from me, Secrets conceal Emotions, Fear, Secrets mask Insecurities, Secrets add Mystery, uncertainty, Secrets cause interest, confusion - Here ya go Acire. Don't worry, it's not meant to be taken seriously here, just something I came up with. It sucks,  but I'm too tired to care much.  Thanks.  Bel (Ooops can't spell  )"And you're my obsession I love you to the bones And Ana wrecks your life Like an anorexia life" - "Ana's Song", Silverchair [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 03-07-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm a little lost on why you dedicated this to Acire but hey... if you say so, Bel.  Yeah, secrets are all that. Methinks the "secret" in this poem is in this part-- "Secrets protect Me from the world, The world from me" Well this showed me the only real reference to yourself in the entire poem, the rest was spent defining secrets. Interesting... Well this one thought had me for a minute. Be sure to whap me if I am completely off or anything. I happened to like it. Short, sweet, an easy and worthwhile read. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Okay, Allan, I talked to Acire online today for the first time. He asked me why I was so secretive, so, out of boredom, I wrote this. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it .Bel |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
heh cute nice little poem you came up with, i enjoyed all you had to say!! JR "The *bump for jeremydraul's work, hahaha!!" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
thanks for the dedication Bel I was shocked to see this dedication though don't worry, the secrets didnt bother me i have to respect your decisions of not talking about certain things...  that's what it's all about "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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shortilove_03 Junior Member
since 2001-02-15
Posts 20Arkansas, United States |
I liked this poem. It wasn't at all sucky to me. =) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwww it's for Acire... nicely written.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this poem, it wasn't sucky. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
This isn't a sucky piece at all. It's very good! Nicely done. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Acire- Shocked? Don't be shocked. Thank you much.shortilove- Thank you Dopey- Awww it was sweet aye? Gracias Lakewalker- Thanks!! Tears of Glass- Thank you, too! Wow thank you all so much(getting repetitive huh?) Bel |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice Bel. Acire should be quite happy with this piece. ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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