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Work In Progress (This is actually the title) |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Work In Progress. Poetry ain’t constructed out of blocks and bit’s of wood it evolves from all those memories or is it maybe that it should? Is poetry not simple just like our A, B, C’s or is just random things? Quite like a plate of peas Poetry is for scholars to tear and pull apart or is it just for lovers to cherish with their heart? If poetry was constructed Out of blocks and bits of wood then this would be a tribute to all poets that are good. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this a lot! VERY VERY well done. I thought that this was so well expressed. Nice job  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I ~really~ enjoyed this! I have written poetry on the concept of poetry before, this one is very good. Can poetry really be defined? Is it all basically one thing? And if not, then what really is defined as poetry? Great job. I'm adding this to my library. And about the last stanza? Thanks for the tribute.  ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
What the HECK IS this doing on the second page?! Come on you people this is a GREAT POEM! Keep it at the top! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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dreamer1 12 5 24 Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 150crossing between |
I loved this poem, very clever. (NO, poetry is NOT for scholars to pick at and pull apart! That's killing it. For every poem you kill you should have to replace it with a new one! Sorry, just venting. Nothing to do with you) ....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice any principle for the sake of it.... Robert Kaplan |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow that was beautiful! i absolutely loved it.. what a wonderful tribute JR "War, what is it good for? Absolutely nothing!" - Edwin Starr |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Beautiful poem.. well written! And very true  Nicely done.*Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very well written marshalzu.....beautiful tribute "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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