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branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-03-05 06:50 PM

Poems inside my head,
Good, none bad,
Everythings about love and happiness,
Nothing about hate.

I take my poems inside my head as a gift,
Gift god has given to write,
Nothing stands in my way,
God will help me if anything gets in my way,
Poems inside my head Peacful,Dreamy.
I wanna share them with you all.
Poems inside my head your all welcome to look inside.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-05 06:51 PM

This was a nice poem. You always have a great tone to your poetry, which creates a wonderful mood.
I enjoyed this.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-03-05 07:04 PM

Hey you! Great to see you around these parts again . It's always a treat to hear what's inside that head! Lovely thoughts here Branden ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-03-06 10:11 AM

hehe
i loved your poems
they always leave a smile on my face!

JR

When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself...

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-03-06 02:29 PM

this poem was very good. NIce to see u again.
Regina

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-03-06 04:34 PM

Nicely done branden.....hope to see more

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2001-03-06 04:46 PM

Cool I really liked this... it put a smile upon my face.

and that's unusual... anyway good work.
Marshal Zu.

Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

7 posted 2001-03-06 09:54 PM

Nice to see you back! Beautiful poem! Thanks for the good read...

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-03-07 07:12 PM

nice to see you sharing again
great job Branden
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

9 posted 2001-03-08 07:44 AM

Branden you need to come here more! That's an order

Good job on this poem.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
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