Teen Poetry #4 |
Life |
Heart=Life Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 29United Kingdom |
Life can be a wonderful place If you live it in a positive way Hurt feelings and bad relationships Make us stronger from day to day. From your first shave To your very first kiss From your first dance You feel happy, lifes bliss. Friends come and go every now and then Through your youth and through your teens Only one or two will be above the rest They're the one's in all your dreams. You experience Love For the good and the worst It could be the sun from above Or your heart and heavens burst. You get many things in life But none of them are free You eventually pay your price My true loves not meant to be. Be careful of your choices And all the thing you do Love's supposed to be heaven Not black and blue. You think you have it Then it goes just like that You wonder why it happened Why life's kicked you in the back. I'll be honest with you Life's about searching For that one special person Your heart and soul start emerging. When life throws you a curve Get back on your feet smiling One day you'll find Love From your first breath living and last one dying |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was a very good piece. Second last stanza, when you said "I'll be honest with you," it had a neat effect on me. Seemed more personal. And the message is simply magnificent. Very well done. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here!!! I think it's great!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great piece. Seemed very personal. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Thanks for the suggestions im most definitely going to follow your words thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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