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November 10th, 1983
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November 10th, 1983 |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
I don't do well when forced to conform to a syllabic format. How I wish I possessed talent. Vreni November 10th, 1983 Careless Fates by chance Spinning their sordid cotton To second hand thread. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You have done a wonderful job with this piece, although I disagree. I think you were made from the finest material!  Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I got you both beat...I'm 2ply...anyways weather you believe it or not that was a great one. Keep it up, even if it isn't in a certain format. >¶Øʆ< |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one vreni......I miss you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This was great... you have done better than I have ever done on this... good work!! Keep it up Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nope...you're not second hand at all... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great job... very meaningful... keep posting plz ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Great job on this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm.......u already know  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love your work, and this one especially! -Allan [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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