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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Here, in Rome, all the ends are lost,--. all the roads here crisscross and merge. Every thought ends up on a cross,-- on each corner, there stands a church. Here, in Rome, every rock is sacred,-- every street, every acre and block. In every sculpture, a God stands naked. Heartbeat blends with the beat of the clock. The shadows are cast on a side, awry. Every shade appears light and vast. The years disappear in a blink of an eye. The remains, though, deny the past. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The years disappear in a blink of an eye. The remains, though, deny the past." Nicely done Master ... a very thought-provoking read!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here, but I think that something was missing in this poem. It didn't have the magic like you do in the others. Anyway, it's still better than what I could ever come up with!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kit stole the one lines i was gonna quote  well done anyways master keep em coming "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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