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Hello . . . Goodbye
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Hello . . . Goodbye |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Hello? Nothin’ much, Thinking about you, How about you? Got a lot on my mind… Thinking about you, Among other things. I wish I were there. I wanna be in your arms, I wanna be your love, I want you to love me. You don’t understand… What is love, When it doesn’t, Feel like it? Sometymes you’re great, And I’d love To keep you like that. You act different, Around your friends, Like I don’t exist. That’s not always it, Sometymes you act, Like my emotions mean nothing. I’m sorry, Hun, But it’s tyme for me to go, I love you. Goodbye. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Interesting piece here. I hope you really said this to whoever treats you like this! Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh this is wonderful. I feel this one for no apparent reasont o me. But thank you for writng it :-) "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well written Tamma. It had me locked from the word 'Hello.' It's a different way of writing and that is why it is so good.  ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
that was brilliant... good idea! thanks for posting, everything okay? JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, this is a really good poem. Are you haveing any problems? Just know you can talk to me, okay? I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love the way this is written but I'm sorry if someone is treating you like this. If this is really going on, it's good that you're standing up to them. Great job on this poem Tamma! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addition... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here tamma.......yea and is everything ok?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I got onee thing to say....."you go girl!!!"  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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