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Megan
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I wrote this for my g/f...haven't seen her in over a week since she lives one town away...anyways this poem is kinda well crap since i was really tired when I wrote it. Memories of a goddess Dancing in my head Whispering her name While sleeping in my bed Closing my eyes Just to see her face Anywhere she is Becomes a beautiful place Such a pretty smile And enchanting eyes When I look into them I can tell no lies Talking to her everyday Seems to make my heart twirl There is nothing more to say Except that I'm in love with this girl >¶Øʆ< |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Poet on Acid: I liked this one. Nicely written. I kinda find that writing late at night is often kinda fun, and yields a lot of neat ideas and forms. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" -- Magus |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Definitely looks like it POA hope things do work out for ya good luck and keep sharing keep us posted too  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very beautiful... not crap at all (am i allowed to say that?) Love is so rare... yet so wonderful!! jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked this. I thought this poem was extra sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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