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MysticalAngel7
Junior Member

since 2001-02-24

Posts 20

0 posted 2001-02-25 09:51 PM

I am driving myself crazy
Simply over you
Because I am not sure
If you love is true

You tell me you love me
But you've lied once before
I want to believe you
But how can I be for sure

I cry myself to sleep
Wondering if you've been true
I sit and I ask myself
What am I putting myself through

Why do I love you so much
Yet it hurts so bad
I want to be happy with you
And never again sad

I feel myself losing it
What do I do
I don't want to leave
Because I love you

But God I am so scared
And I hate it when you get mad
When I want to talk to you
About what makes me sad

I never want to lose you
Your my world.. my soul
God, I love you
You make me whole

**What do you do when you love someone so bad it hurts?**

Neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,can ever dissever my soul from the soul, of the beautiful Annabel Lee -E.A.Poe

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2001-02-26 04:20 PM

this was an amazing poem
im in this same situation
all ya can do is hang in there things will get better
remember
~everythigns okay in the end,if its not okay its not the end~

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

SwEeTdEeLiTe19
New Member

since 2001-02-26

Posts 3
ca

2 posted 2001-02-26 04:45 PM

answer to your question you love them till you die in that deep corner of your broken heart keeping faith in what you believe if they dont see in you the passion and love you have for them then they really dont deserve your love...but that doesnt mean give up maybe one day they will realize...

*a friend is the one who comes in when the whole world has gone out*

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-02-26 05:43 PM

It's too bad that love comes hand-in-hand with insecurity. But hey, it's all a part of the package. Love itself is not good or bad, it is simply extreme.
Technical advice would be that the last two lines were sylliblicly off. Try to add a word or two to the message, or make it one line followed or preceded by another.
Just a friendly point of advice. Nice job.
-Allan

Welcome to Planet Earth, where the angels tread on the land. ~~Allan, to Amanda.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-27 10:44 PM

Doesn't love come in a really hard way
nothing we want in this world is easy
nothing comes on a silver plate
i see so much passion i your poem
hope things get well for you

thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-02-28 02:24 PM

Wow excellent poem..I am in the same situation right now. Its hurts to love someone soooo much and never knowing if they feel the same...Hope your situation improves.
Great Poem
~Nikki~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-02-28 06:05 PM

Nicely done......I know how it is to love someone so much it hurts. Nice poem, you expressed this perfectly.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

7 posted 2001-02-28 06:29 PM

This was an awsome poem!! Very touching I really really liked!!! I've been through this also... Grrr.. and i still don't know hehe, but his poem helped me out a lot!! Thankyou and great job!!
Luv ya,
cutie

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

8 posted 2001-03-01 06:41 PM

Spectacular vision of how your love is so true and worthy of respect and affection.. what a beautiful poem!
"I never want to lose you
Your my world.. my soul
God, I love you
You make me whole"

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

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