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The bad side of the bad side
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The bad side of the bad side |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA 
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This is about something that happened about a year and a half ago. I know I was wrong for doing it and I understand if people attack me for being wrong, but what I did still hurt me. I know it was wrong, I know it hurt you, Any other guy would be happy, But crying is all I can do, Even though I am the one at fault, I still love you, Why did I do this, Now it's all going to be through, We've been through a lot, And you've been through more, I messed up bad, I now I feel like a whore, I know you hate me now, And I understand why, I wish you could give me a second chance, All I can do it cry, Yes I messed up, But I learn from my mistakes, Can't you just forgive me, Or has our relationship hit the brakes, As I said I know I messed up, This is painfull for you yes indeed, But no one cares about my feelings, Your side is all that they can see. I got what I deserved. Ricky |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
im not going to attack you or judge you. I did however really enjoy the poem. please keep writing them Regina |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Ricky: I will not attack either. I will only say this: The conscience is the most fierce of attackers when you've done wrong. In my own life it has been a debilitating attacker when I've done wrong. But it is good when the conscience attacks. It means that it's still there. A truly evil person has no conscience. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh." -- Magus |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*attacks you* now wasn't that fun? ANyway, what exactly did you do? Anyway I thought this was nice  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA |
Thank you all. The story behind it is, I was with this girl for about 4 months. Then I cheated on her with one of my good friends. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ricky, no one judges in the actually forum..we have ICQ and other chat programs to do that.  It was a mistake and the best thing you can do is learn from it. ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Ricky--this must've been during one of our "down tymes" cause I never heard a word of this before this poem... You KNOW that NO MATTER what, you can ALWAYS come to me...One more thing to say, and please don't take it the wrong way, but I love you  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's nice to see someone who admits his faults, and you have done that. Hioe things get better for you, and hope you learned from this. thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Let the man with no sin cast the first stone.... and you know that ain't me...hehe I'm really sorry this has happened... sometimes you can wish to eternity trying to change the past... but it doesn't help. I guess you should just chalk(spell?) it up to experience, learn from it.. and move forward. jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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