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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
( I do not actually have a title for this yet, but hopefully one day I will. Suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you, Amanda) Your best friend may withdraw from your side and become your worst enemy, A child may go against his parents in a repulsive confrontation, Your neighbor may have a feud with you that becomes a legacy, A household may diverge, repudiating you and all you represent. Your intelligence can combat your heart until there’s no return, Everyone may disjoin... everyone may leave you. However, in this world of Greed, Destruction, and Dismay.. There is a beam of light the gleams a mist the shade. Through this world of corruption he shall always stay. And once you depart from this world, and are laid within the ground. Aloft your catacomb he shall lie, Keeping his pledge never to abandon your side,.... ...always to be around. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
The title was alright, Amanda. And the poem is simply excellent. I'm glad that you have found he who will always be with you. Great job on this piece. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, I thank you for your reply and even more from the Wild Laugh I had gotten from it. The poem holds much more then what you see, and the "he" I am talking about is not what you think. That is why I had to laugh. *smiling Thank you for your reply once again. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Are you sure? I meant God. Wasn't this right?  |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, Actually no that is not right. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very beautiful poem Amanda beautiful thoughts now im curious...So, who is it? "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ITS ME... aw hell yes! Thanks babe! Hah!  Nice poem, i thought it was simply filled with wisdom and intelligence JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
lol @ Jer. Nice one Amanda. You have sparked curiosity in me too now. Keep on expressing those thoughts. ~AF~ "Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers." ~ George Santayana [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 02-27-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here.........i'm lovin it. And jer, in yer dreams!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
I like this a lot...I know that MY "he" is Jesus...I know that He will never abandon me. But I am also wondering, who is this person you are writing of? Anyway, this is a really amazing poem! God Bless and Keep Smiling Stacey The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6 |
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