Realization of my confusion.

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Teen Poetry #4

Realization of my confusion.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2001-02-25 09:13 AM

this poem had been deleted cause it goes agains pip guidelines. Suicidal glorification is unacceptable in these forums. Hope you understand

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-02-25 09:56 AM

Oh...that one hit home. I've been suicidal a couple times. EEk, I'm completely speechless. It's such a wonderful work though, keep writing. Welcome to Passions everyone says.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

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Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-25 03:05 PM

Excellent poem. Your afterthought was a true one, I write to lift something off my chest often. Once recorded on paper, emotions tend to drift from the body.
Great job.
-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-25 08:04 PM

Nicely done here. I thought this poem was quite good. Very well written.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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