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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I wrote this poem for my gf cuase she's been feeling a bit down from all her hw she's had, heh, and she's on yearbook staff which is stressing her out too. Anyway, here is: Two eyes, seen in dream Day and night Eyes in a face, that reminds me Of heavenly angels With a Smile That I cherish seeing So very much All of which Are those of my love That I hold so dear Who speaks to my heart Telling it she loves me With out saying a word "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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lil_princess New Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 4 |
That is so sweet of u to be so considerate! I bet she really appriciated it, i know I would! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
There is nothing like seeing things like this in another's eyes. I'm sure that this will make your g/f forget everything else!  Great work. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
awww.....a mushy one...thats so sweet. I've noticed there are alot more lovey dovey ones on here lately, which as much as I hate to admit is a good thing. Keep up the good work happy sappy or gothic, either way will do! >¶Øʆ< |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nICE one here........mushy.....but nice. Love is something that doesn't need to be said.....sometimes you just need to gaze into her glowing eyes and bathe in it's light.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
lil_princess Heheh, yeah, Steph really liked the poem I'm very glad that it cheered her up today.Love Bug I usualy can cheer her up when I'm able to see her, or, more I should say, when her parents let her see me ~~ Poet & Dopy Glad that you like the poem, though I've nothing more to say, seeing as how my mind just turned itself off and my stomach is informing me that it's wants food NOW! ~_~ "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
How nicely said, it's great I'm glad to hear she liked it, there might be something wrong with her if she didn't I was a co-editor for my school's tiny yearbook, it turned out really good."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very cool. Telling you she loves you without a word.. nice line there. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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