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Teen Poetry #4

This I feel is true

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-02-23 01:02 AM

Don't let them tell you different boo
You should have no doubt that this is true

If one day they could see the love I got is true
I hope you know I'd never leave
this I promise you

I know you see that I've got the love you nedd
Now tell me with passion that this is what you see
Tell me once more how you can't loose me

Many tears have fallen
Both inside and out
No more tears my love
this I promise you

Boo see what was once too good to be true
Is the realiest thing you ever knew
See that is was meant to be
this I promise you
That this love is real; now show me the love in you

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-02-23 10:49 AM

Nice work,if you truly feel this way about someone I hope you are pursuing it. Give 'em this poem maybe.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-23 11:17 PM

very heart felt poem
if i were you, i'd give him this poem
thanks for the read
keep sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-24 12:15 PM

I like your style.....very real.
Great job and keep posting!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

4 posted 2001-02-24 01:07 PM

Great piece. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it"

Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

5 posted 2001-02-24 09:40 PM

A job well done! Keep posting.

*Jennifer

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

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