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Words_of_Glitter
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since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2001-02-22 07:35 PM

Sometimes I just pretend not to hear the things you say
Try to wish your words away
Like a rainy day
But you soak me with your lies
Until I am dripping confusion all over the place
I used to love your face
But I don't recognize it anymore

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 2001-02-22 09:23 PM

WHat a great poem, I know pretty much how you feel. Keep up the good work.

~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-02-22 09:43 PM

This is a good poem WoG. It is unfortunate and really does suck when you don't recognise the person you used to know.
Keep your chin up though.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 2001-02-22 10:22 PM

Very powerful and well thought out idea! I enjoyed reading!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-02-22 10:48 PM

oh i know this feeling all to well. makes u mad to think you trusted someone then they turn your back on you or whatever the case may be. oh well they werent worth your time in the first place. keep posting

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-02-23 06:38 PM

I'm sorry to see that you feel this way right now. Just hang in there and everything will get back to normal. thanks for the read

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-02-23 11:59 PM

Nicely done......short and sweet.....and dripping with talent.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Words_of_Glitter
Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

7 posted 2001-02-24 01:21 AM

Dopey_Dope, I really enjoy reading your replies and I appreciate them very much! They are never boring and always original. So thank you...and thanks to everyone else who replied. I really didn't think anyone would like this poem because it's so short and sort of unifinished.

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

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