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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Looking at old pictures of you, you cancer was eatting at you, my disability was eatting at me, but two awesome people in the picture. I am lonely without you, sometime's I see you in my dreams, I think your real until I reach out to you, your not there. I know your happy what progress I've done, like walking, telling people what I need, but I'm still the same person. Are you the same person as you were down here? your 58 years old now, do you remember who your family is? we all remember you. I'll be graduating next year! I'll be going to computer college, or writing nothing's stopping me, unless I stop myself. I'm making my dreams come true, it's al up to me, because it just is, I'm reaching for the stars, I'm reaching for my goals. Love,  Minna |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, This poem was soo sad!! But it was also great all at the same time hehe!! I loved it, and I had many frineds pass away from so many things.. and its a horible loss.. even if its a family, friend or even a pet!!! But glad you are getting through it good...!!! Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Fantastic writing Ski*Chick. The emotions that you have captured here were just great. Don't ever stop reaching for your dreams. I hope you do get what you want. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Minna you've expressed you feeling very well again. You know, your dad is proud of you and what you have accomplished. He will always be with you...remember that So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I want to become a writer, I won't stop reaching for the stars, or I won't give up on life Minna You can hide, You can be crul, You can't be my friend. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Minna great job, quite the sad one though. Do you write happy poems? I'd love to see some!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Yes I do write happy poems, Minna You can hide, You can be crul, You can't be my friend. |
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