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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I poured out my heart to you It took all the nerve I had To write that letter to you Justin, I love you Never forget that I just told you what I feel And asked if you felt the same Why can’t you answer me? I didn’t tell you But I wanted to die When you said you wouldn’t answer I’ve been debating Handing that letter over to you Now, I wish I hadn’t Cause then I wouldn’t be Where I am right now I’m just wondering why You won’t answer I love ya to death And will either way I just want to know If you feel the same . . . Sorry, I haven't been here in almost forever, but I was on a trip to Texas... WOO-HOO!!! Texan Cowboys!!! www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, are you having a Justin problem? I have Justin problems all the time. (Justin problems = problems involving Justins of the world) What has the guy done this time? Awesome poem, great discription of emotion and whatever. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
lol texan boys...cute cute  I know a few myself  LOL Neways...i know what u mean by ure poem. well obviously not exactly, but i always seem to be the one telling the other person how i feel and waiting, for what seems like eternity, for them to answer me. and the longer they take to reply...the more time it gives me to sit and anaylze the whole thing. i always get myself into trouble when i have time like that to analyze. so DONT DO IT! LOL thats the moral of the story haha sorry im just in a good mood today..but neways! great poem..*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
heh, always clear with your words.. another good chapter from the Justin Volume JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I hope things are looking up for you Tamma. I know what it feels like to not have that answer. I have been waiting for months and it kills. Great poem, I'm just sorry that things aren't going that great. "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You girls shoould just drop the Justins of this world. That's the final lesson right there What's wrong with the Javeirs  lol j/k Dopes So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Tamma, I haven't been here much either. Anyway, great poem. A lot of emotion involved. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey Tamma! Good job on this poem. So great I'm craving frosted flakes! *dodges tomatoes* Okay, sorry that joke was lame.  Anticipation sucks. But you already told me you have found an answer, so best of luck in the future too! Now go and read mine! LOL -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great expression Tamma ... I hope all works out for you, and I love the new picture! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha yea!! What's wrong with all the Javier's in the world? Why don't you give us a chance?! Hope things get better tamma...... Ps. Cowboys suck....Island boys rock  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Beautiful poem!! Now I know how my boyfriend feels at the moment. I'm avoiding him like crazy 'cause three stupid words just won't come out. I can't exactly explain why. Ever since he said it, I just couldn't, he's hurting I'm sure. I avoid the phone and don't return his phone calls. Now I know I have to call him, thanx for opening my eyes with this poem. Expression was great by the way. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
hmmm...Allan was right...I did get my answer... Altho I seem to have left out a pretty big detail:I wrote a letter to Justin telling him how much I loved him and that i wanted to spend the rest of my life with him and asked him if he felt the same... Answer: He said he wouldnt answer my question, cause everytime he answers a question like that we end up arguing, so I took that as he doesnt wanna argue and that means that he wants us to last...I asked him if thats what it was and he said yea www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Tamma, I figured the poem was about something like that. Great job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
great poem Tamma, very straight forward..i like it. amazing job Tamma, keep em coming Regina |
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