Teen Poetry #4 |
I never neede'd punctuation? |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I never needeād punctuation? Who. Here; with, me could disagree! :My poems {end] with exclamation. for... they are, powerful you, see F0r it i$ love that hold$ me captive # Each line__ is overfilled^ with love E|a|c|h| word is gentle +and attractive My re@ders c@nnot =get enough Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
heh quite humorous.. nice change here JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
LOL, I love it! Punctuation can add more feeling to a poem. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hehe.. very clever. I need a good laugh *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting Master very interesting indeed So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hehehe I liked this little style of yours. You are right, we can't get enough! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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