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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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wipe your teary eyes though you feel you're all alone i am at your side Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That was Beautiful Allan, We are all here for you Angel... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what a wonderful way to show support, allan..  angel, i dont know whats up but please feel free to email me if you need to vent to a stranger...sometimes confiding in someone who doesnt know about the situation might be easier, yes? |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan~  I wish you could see this smile on my face. I haven't been this happy or felt this loved in who knows how long ago. Thank you so much for being at my side. You dont know how much you posting this means to me.[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful allan. I liked this one a lot. *hugs you* awwwwwwww  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Melster, Kaile- Yeah, i know. Ain't i the greatest? ~_^ Angel in Flight-We are always here for you. Dopey Dope- *shudder Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is sweet. You're really into the senryu thing?? HUH? j/k It takes a lot of talent to be able to put meaning into so little words. Nice one. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you're a good man Allan, yes you are I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, Wonderful Senryu as usual even better because it is for me. Anyway I have to add this to my library so here you go~*~*~*~*~*alright done. Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I knwo I said I was going to leave, but I couldn't stay away form here. This is fantastic work! You're very good. I'll post a supportive poem of my own sometime. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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