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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Think about the problems of life Most of them are based on strife In truth and fact, there are too many ‘Cause some fight even over a penny This we can change bit by bit But first people must think about it Think about nature’s gifts And tell me if you can make a list Slowly but surely it’s dying away And man is the reason why they can’t stay This we can change bit by bit But first people must think about it Think about how short life can be And how some die painfully I know none of you want to go through that fact But smoking and drinking would definitely do that This we can change bit by bit But first people must think about it Think about love and compassion Don’t you think that’s better than hatred and confusion? Some people only have hatred in mind But it’s not worth, what in the end you’ll find This we can change bit by bit But first people must think about it Thinking about it is just a start ‘Cause only you know what in your heart We say that actions speaks louder than words So show me that my voice is not unheard Clean up your act, it’s the only way to be For how this world is today, depends on you and me. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great message, my friend. It will take quite a bit of thought to change some of these things, but it takes one thought to start it! Thanks for sharing!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh, I love that "We can change it bit by bit, but first people must think about it". This is SO my thought pattern! Problem with me is I see the worst of people in a general mass. Oh well, maybe if you're positive, we balance out. Everything balances in this universe. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is a good poem. i think everyone needs to read this, and follow it and "think about it" *L*  ~*Valerie*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought about it and agreed hehe. Great message!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW beautiful thoughts I surely will let you be heard So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
 I thought a lot about this, the world is in a lot of trouble if it continues the way it is. I just needed to say something, writing is my way of expressing myself. I'm happy I'm not being unheard. Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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