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Life is weird This was Wroten for a friend
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Life is weird This was Wroten for a friend |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello everyone.. I'm back!! I haven't written in a long time, and haven't been on here in a long time!! But my friend was filling really bad about life.. and I wrote this to cheer her up, and it worked!! So I hope you all like this! Thankyou Sometimes life is good, or in other words great! Other times life is sad, boring or even complicated or just pear unfair Things can be stressing you out, then one minute later your in a land of magical surroundings Life can be weird Things can happen for no reason, but at the same time.. there's a reason for everything, you just don't know it Sometimes boys and girls can be so different, but in the end they end up together, and there being a match for everyone Many times parents can be just plain be mean, or just to much, but you'll always know you will love them forever. Life brings friends to, it would be hard to go on without some one to care for, or to worry about at least part of the time Life seems to have everything, it just takes some people to a little while to figure it out Life brings you friends, relations, people to love you life also brings you death, and broken hearts, or just pear bad luck But sometime in your life, you will have at least one minute of happiness, and you probably won't even remember it. So just smile, and be happy, clear your head, and open your heart, also open your eyes, because there are many people out there waiting to love you, you just have to be able to love them back. If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Good to see you again! This is a great piece, full of wisdom. Thanks for posting!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It does work  thanks for sharing this one So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I haven't met you , so HELLO THERE!!! Well if I was feeling bad this would have worked hehe, but I'm fine......nonetheless, a wonderful read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Like it poem! I think I'll send it to one of my bummed out friends. That's great!! Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe "When I find the right guy for me, I'll love him no matter what he does or what he's like" |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Thankyou soo much, oh and on the subject its supposed to be Writen** OH-well.. I'm gald you like it!! I'm hopeing to start writing more, but if i'm not writing i'm readying all your grate poems!!! If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
great poem! I loved it... I think I might keep this one. *click* right into my library. Thanks for the good read. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
 Welcome back!! I luv this poem, it is sooo true!! Great job on this one! Keep writing!! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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