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sumthin new its acutally about good stuff in my life
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sumthin new its acutally about good stuff in my life |
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ixteme Junior Member
since 2001-02-14
Posts 10 |
ok this is a first... i never write about good things, but ive been havin a good week and im tryin sumthin new.. u breathe apon my neck u send across just the slitness of a tease ure look posses my soul ure touch sends chills to me inside ure eyes hypmotize me it drives me insane ure kiss is so soft it makes me beg for more there is something about you something that cant be explained maybe this something should stay a secret maybe u are the unreal maybe u are just a fake but u cant be a fake uve put my heart back together u made it possible for me to love again u stole my heart in a good way u make me realize what i have in front of me uve changed me for the better i hope we will love one another forever hmmm [This message has been edited by ixteme (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great piece about this new love you have found. When things go well, sometimes it seems too good to be true. You describe the feelings well. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite the sweet poem isnt it? This was a very lovely piece!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I like this... very pretty. Well done. Keep posting. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I have actually been reading all of your pieces and this one is a change from them. Still, a sweet poem that was well written. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wekk written my friend. It's nice to know you've found soemone  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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