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Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

0 posted 2001-01-14 01:09 AM

I wrote this for Angel in Flight to give you hope, I don't really know what to think of this one, but I hope you all tell me what you think...

Angel In Flight...

You came to us
With a broken heart,
No hope in your life,
No care in the world.
But what you don't realise,
Is how special you are...
Yes, you have things
That are missing from your life,
But you have people who care,
All around you...
It's here that we care,
It's here we give hope,
It's here we give support,
It's here we will always be.
You make us smile,
You make us cry,
You make us happy,
You make us always
Believe in ourselves.
So this is my first attempt,
To let you know we care
To let you know we'll listen,
And let you know there's hope!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-01-14 10:36 AM

Ohhhhh you guys thank you so much. Melz This is wonderful just wonderful. I am starting to feel a little better now. Thank you melz and thank you everyone.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-14 03:07 PM

NIce one melz, sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

GirlsBestFriend
Member

since 2000-12-27

Posts 71
Planet Earth

3 posted 2001-01-14 03:21 PM

beautiful!

~lotsa luv

"Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world"

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-15 04:24 PM

Very well said, you poem is great

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-15 05:44 PM

i think she speaks for us all
beautifully said Mels

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2001-01-15 06:41 PM

I feel the same way.. good job mel.

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-01-15 06:43 PM

What can I say that hasn't been said already? Excellent poem, Melz! We are all here for you, Angel in Flight!

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

8 posted 2001-01-16 04:07 PM

THanks guys... I am glad that Angel In Flight that you are feeling a bit better now... just remember that it is all the truth...

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

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