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Do You Know Her? |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
~about my best friend... She knows me as well as anyone could possibly know me She's not just like anybody She'd rather be calm than all fussy She's something out of the ordinary She won't ever let you down And pick you up when you're as low as the ground Do you know her? I do I can call her whenever I please Don't have to tell her that she's needed I can trust her with my own life I know that she'll be there all the time I know that she sees me differently I can never fool her when I'm not happy Do you know her? I do Told her once that she was my hero Only word that comes to mind is thankful Don't really know whether she knows it or not On thing only worries me, When I pass away hopefully She'll know that apart of me was made because of her Someday I'm hoping I can return any help she's ever given me Hope I can be just as caring as she was to me Do you know who I'm talking about? Do you know her? Maybe you should "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is a wonderful poem...I have a friend that is just like this. Thanks for posting it, |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
What would we do without best friends? Well done, well done.  Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe "When I find the right guy for me, I'll love him no matter what he does or what he's like" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I'd probably do nothing without my best friend, but mine lives in Alabama....Woe is me. Anyway nicely done here. A wonderful tribute to your best friend.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You must have quite a friend to deserve such a dedication. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful friendship ... nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is wonderfully written we're lucky we can have such great friends. i have one question to ask you... LOL it's about your quote, from what song is that?? *L* i've been tryin to think of it but i can't. Anyways... i love this poem. i might print and give to my friend. telling her you wrote it of course ~*Valerie*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Friends do have a big part in our lives. So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. [This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks for all your guys' comments, i'm thinking of giving it to her on her birthday. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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