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Teen Poetry #4

Love Is Pain

Love_is_Pain
Junior Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 16

0 posted 2001-02-17 04:37 PM

LOVE starts out strong,
But ends in PAIN.

Just like when u light a candle,
The flame is high,
But it onle takes a second,
To blow it out.

LOVE is the flame,
And the smoke is the PAIN,
So why light LOVE,
When it will end in PAIN?

Because what we strive,
It is alive,
Within u and me,
A thing called lust,
It's to bust,
Bust out from within,
Bust out from your heart.

It only takes one look,
Or the sound of one word,
To think u fell in LOVE,
After awhile the lust will grow,
Maybe it will trick you,
Or maybe it WILL glow.

But eventually it will go,
Whether it walks away,
Or even by death,
It won't stay,
Because no matter what,
LOVE always ends in PAIN.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-17 06:56 PM

I'm sorry you feel this way
but you might be looking at it in the wrong perspective
put it this way
if pain doesn't exist, for would we know how happiness or love mean?
keep your head up

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Love_is_Pain
Junior Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 16

2 posted 2001-02-17 07:42 PM

when i said this, i meant, Love that is not real hurts worse than Love that is real...because i believe Lies hurt more than the Truth

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-02-17 07:43 PM

Very good work. It's definetly an eye-opener. For a lot of people I'll bet. I think it's fantastic. Although I don't agree with the concept, I'm not here to bash creativity. Bold, I respect that.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-18 01:42 AM

I believe a lot of things.....all of which are too long to explain.....but I thought this was a pretty good write.

Post more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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