Teen Poetry #4 |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Prenote: Just to clear this up, this poem is about "Ana." Ana is another name for anorexia. Oftentimes, anorexia is referred to as this person who's named Ana. That is who I am talking about in this poem. Ana is a beast who plagues many lives all over the world, whispering things into the ears of people who suffer from eating disorders telling he or she what a failure they are. And why they shouldn't eat. I hope you all enjoy this poem, and I hope this clears up any confusion. She made you look at her again She's back this time to stay, That's when you start to realize She never went away. She doesn't care how tired you are of hearing all your flaws, She makes you see what isn't there And tricks you more and more. Her cage is never small enough The routine never tough enough, She'll let you think you've won the game Then she'll change the rules again. If you think you've got the strength to try and outsmart her, She's cunning, quick and clever And she's played this game before. She's angry now - you lied to her! and her tone of voice has changed. She looks you in the eye and screams, "You'll never win this game!" *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." [This message has been edited by Tears of Glass (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ooooh fiesty!! Go get him... stupid men!!! hehe just playin.... Nice job on this!! xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
great poem. i like it a lot. i see a lot of people like the one you describe here. this one is goin in the library ~*VALERIE*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
jenn? tears -- why even sweat it, just let it go why stoop down and play the same game? be a better person don't listen to jenn So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, that's a good one. A lot of guys could learn from that. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, that's a good one. A lot of guys could learn from that. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
oh shoot, sorry about posting two, and a third is dumb, but I'm new at this: gimme a chance or light me on fire, you ahve 3 seconds left to decide... lol "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I say we light Evenblood on fire...haha Anyway.....very nice poem but I'm going to have to agree with acire on this. He's 23! he knows EVERYTHING! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Great poem....I know someone I would like to send this to. In fact I think I'll let him read this. Thank you. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Written well... keep writing. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Who is this about, Anyways nice poem. --Neo |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Nicely written... keep posting |
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