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ixteme Junior Member
since 2001-02-14
Posts 10 |
heartless standing still, cold and wet shivering in the darkness i seem to become colder as you pass me by teeth chattering knees knocking heart pounding mind failure you cross through my path of ungreatfulness you break the lock of loving on your way through mindlessness insanity im going crazy just drive a stake through my heart to end me tear open my heart that is no longer needed you can just shred it to a billion pieces you make it so hard for me to love again the love i could give to someone special save your breath i dont need the crap the crap you've givin me all along the heart breaking crazyness ive been suffering from you are nothing but a heartless soul [This message has been edited by ixteme (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I understand this well.......I can't believe nobody has replied to this.....let alone any moderators read this one. This just goes to show you how people are being very lazy here. Nice one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, I really like this! It's realy dramatic, the emotion's so thick you could cut it :-) This is a truly fantastic work, it should be published. Just don't let a conservative edit the book or paper k? "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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ixteme Junior Member
since 2001-02-14
Posts 10 |
thanks i dont think n e 1 was aloud to reply cause of the cussing they emailed me and told me i have to take it off but i dont know how haha... www.ixteme.musicpage.com peace pete |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If you look at the pad w/ a pencil icon, that should allow you to edit your post. But you only have 24 hrs from the time you posted it. If not, contact any of the forum moderators, and they'll edit it for you. hope that helps  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
i know how you feel, regretfully, sucks. thats all there is to it, but dont hold yourself back from loving again, because the person that hurt you will succeed in ruining you, and you're better then that *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. That was beautifully written. I totally love the way you were able to express the feelings that were going on inside of you. I'm glad you realised what was happening before it was too late  "I am Canadian" - Joe "If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams" - Rhonda J. Adolph "When I find the right |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Wow great poem..it truly brought tears to my eyes. I am glad you reaized and came to your senses before it was too late. |
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ixteme Junior Member
since 2001-02-14
Posts 10 |
thank you, thank you if n e 1 wants to talk to me i have aol instant messanger: jncoman003 icq: 31466899 or email me: slipknotfreak247@hotmail.com www.ixteme.musicpage.com peace pete |
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