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#20(Toast to my brother and sister-in-law on their wedding day)
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#20(Toast to my brother and sister-in-law on their wedding day) |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
As we have witnessed, here on this day, Love is alive and here to stay Upon it they shall always stand And proclaim their love before every land. Mountains shall fall, rivers shall dry Before their love, either denies It shall always stand ever so tall Like a colossus that never falls These two hearts have melded and now are as one Together Forever their life has begun To have and to hold, and cherish each other To live and to learn and to love one another. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
how sweet.....very very sweet poem here. A wonderful display of true love and the bond formed together once married. Nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Love is beautiful, and so is this poem.  I wish them (and you) the best of luck. and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
What A wonderful piece and Great tribute to them both. You truly showed the power and meaning of love in this piece. Into the library shall this one go until I need a spiritul boost of love into my soul. Wonderful once again. Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, nice tribute, your work is very good, cant wait to see more Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on this poem!  Did they love it??"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker [b] [URL=http://www.therainforestsite.com]http |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh. Love. How sweet...  Marriage sounds so permanent, tied down to one person you're lifetime...and yet it sounds inviting. Good luck to your brother and sister-in law. Nice writing.. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is very touching! I wish i could have written something like this when my sister got married. I wish you all the best of luck. (Did they like the poem??) *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful tribute to your brother and sister-in-law they must be really proud of what you've written thanks for sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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StratMatt Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87Macomb, IL, U.S.A. |
Well, before it was also a tribute to my brother, because my brother and I are very obviously brothers and I've been called "Bill" and been compared to him so many times that it's kind of annoying, but I had one line in there that said, Even though I don't like being called 'Bill', there's no one I would rather be mistaken for or compared to. They loved it, and in fact, the maid of honor originally planned to give a toast, but after hearing mine, decided she didn't want to follow, I didn't find that out until later though, hehe. Actually, also being a college kid with too many bills and not enough money, I actually wrote the poem in calligraphy and had it custom framed as their gift, only cost me about $30 altogether, and its been hanging on their wall ever since. |
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