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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Lovely! I think you are happy... that's just what I gathered... hehehe ^_^ <----featured player. Nice to be included! What a lovely concept... it makes you really ponder the emotions... for some things cannot be expressed in words. Very well done, Amanda. Thank you for allowing us the pleasure of sharing your joy. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
WOW! I see happiness... I see those smiley faces and stuff. In contrast, i also see loneliness... the blank spaces in between.... hmmmm clever idea but I think you may want to add some poetry to keep this poast alive! Clever idea! Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis 'Fading Me Away' |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I see a Spanish women dancing in the stars on top of a house with a little road in front of it. The sky's about to rain and she's enjoying one last dance with her husband before the skies drop their water. And I'm not making that up, that's what I saw  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
See dots and thingies.... I didn't like this  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, I love it! there's infinite meaning in it, no matter what was intended. Some will see little happy faces, and others may see Spanish dancing women. The literal translations would say emptiness. Which would fit with the idea of a great deal of meaning. I absolutely love this one! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I need to add this to my library! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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