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Life Goes On
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Life Goes On |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Life goes on < !signature-->So they always tell me Life goes on But it still hurts so much Life goes on But I’m still in love with you Life goes on We’re still together Life goes on You’ve left your mark on me Life goes on With us still in love Life goes on With you in my future Life goes on With me in your arms Life goes on With you in my heart Life goes on With me in love with you Life goes on And I want to spend it with you Life goes on And I Love you ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ ~*~ Forever ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
The aches of the heart can be truely lasting, Tamma. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That is beautiful Tamma, you are a lucky girl to have found someone soooo valuable!! Great Work, keep it up!!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
looks like you have true inspiration ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
im wit dopey on this one!  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nicely said in this one, keep them coming "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Great poem. And thank you for sharing What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww... so positive. I love it. Well done Tamma. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem. so so sweet!! ~kate~ |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thankx for the comments, ya'll but I've already forgotten what Justin and I were arguing about in this one...hehe www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very sweet. All tho long over, heartache can stick around!! Thanks for sharing.  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
good for you Tamma good to be open minded about life thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Life does go on....even when u are in pain, and even when u just want it to stop so u can live that moment for a little longer. Well ur poem was awesome! Keep postin! Much Luv, ~*~P*R*I*S*C*I*L*L*A~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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