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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-02-15 08:27 AM

Nothing is forever,
I guess that's what they say,
but no one will take the joy,
I felt on Valentine's day.
Nothing is forever,
not a simple single thing.
But the only thing forever,
is what good times may bring.
Nothing is forever,
not even me or you,
but if we're together,
foever's what we'd do.
Nothing is forever,
unless something's true.
And I know in my heart,
forever I'll spend with you.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-02-15 09:01 AM

its quiet good. the whole nothing lasts forever concept. taking the good things and keeping them. ummm...im not making sense.
so ill say. great work.
Regina

for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-15 09:07 AM

oh Allysa

this is really sweet
I'm glad you had a great Valentine's
I though otherwise by reading your other poem
beautiful sentiments Allysa

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-02-15 04:48 PM

This is really good. Very emotional.

xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-02-15 05:14 PM

I really liked this. Thanks for posting it.

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-02-15 05:20 PM

That was beautiful!!! I luv it!!! Nothing really does last forever...but when you are with the one you luv, some things seem like they do. Or the other way around....i dont know, I am confusing my self. Well awesome poem, keep it up!!

Much Luv,
~*~Priscilla~*~

How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

6 posted 2001-02-15 06:38 PM

Impressive poem. I think that whoever it is written for will certainly like it a lot. The rhyming in this poem was quite good as well.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-02-15 07:39 PM

Very nicely done here......all I gotta say is AWWWWWWW this was sweeeeeeeeeet!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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