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'Yesternight' and a apology....
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'Yesternight' and a apology.... |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
forethought: -happiness is not a fish that you can buy, but you can trade it. theres a market down the street, care if i join you? -=Yesternight=- Yesternight was magic, it all seemed to click, all of it. the insecurities i had, the realities i faced, it all seemed to click and i yet i feel incomplete, as if i have to share this, and i cant find how... Yesternight i understood, the love for my enemies, the lover for my friends. its not who loves you, i thought as i coped with it, is who you love and why. no longer do i feel incomplete, yesternight i found happiness and its all i feel -San -|formal apology: well i dont know about the old people in the board cause they dont seem to be here as much, but i think that the "hardest break-up" isnt fer them. i thought i would tell a large story and then have you all get into the melancholic mood needed to fully understand the hardest breakup. i consider the "hardest breakup" a very depresing session one with deals with love, confusion, paranoia, and mostly death. all of these are subjects that are current and people seem to enjoy them because it looks as if they themselves are trapped in a sea of disilusion. i therefore retract my original saying that i would post the "hardest break-up" sessions first, and will post other things. i may get flamed for this, people may say that i should not get into their personal lives and blah, blah, blah. but this was my final desicion. you will also see me more active on the boards than before, thing that may come as a surprise to many... i will still be selective in the poems i reply too. i will consider the posting of it later on, if you would like to talk to me into posting it or just have something to say that may change my point of view feel free to contact me any day. once again, i apologize. [This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Okay, the poem was very good, but the apology kind of lost me? You don't think we're ready for your work? It's too depressing? Don't apologize if you don't want to post something, it's your work, therefore your descision.... I think ultimatly it's up to you. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Felipe the beforenote rocked. The poem itself was great, but not what i'm used to. It's one of those MEAINGFUL ones that written plain and simple, like we talked about. Nice one though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
yah that beforenote was really inspirational... the poem shows a lot of meaning in how you became happy ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I am with Jenn on this one... The poem was great... finally there is someone who knows their happiness and can see it if not grasp it... keep up the great work... as for the apology, I am lost.... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
thanx fer the replies so far.  ill go with the easy explanation for the apology. i said i would do it and suddenly i backed out. im sorry i backed out suddenly. i know i didnt have to do it (apologize), its just the considerate thing to do, and those who know me know that i always try to do the right thing. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Mmm...perfectly all right. It was terrific of you to adress the issue and apoligize, thanks for doing it. The poem was supercool, and I, like Dopey, thought the forethought rocked. Much luv. ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
About the apology, I think that whatever you think is best is fine with me. I think the poem is good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Apologies determines one's heart your poem shows a lot of meaningful words thanks for sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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