Teen Poetry #4 |
Reflect me as I am... (repost?) |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
“Reflect me as I am, — three-dimensional! Do not flatten me with your exterior, rather curve from all the conventional and engulf me,-- first the inferior and then cover it up with affinity. Swallow light and reflect its radiance, capture everything in your vicinity, and invert the lines of your radius as to include all of the outwardly,-- everything that is our of your medium. In a sense, I guess that I’m cowardly, I’m afraid of the permanent tedium of the life on this side of the border... so I beg you reflect me, I’m sinking!”-- Thus I prayed to oblivious water, as the puddles were drying and shrinking. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you are obviously very talented i'm glad youve decided to post more you have such a huge vocabulary loving it keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yet another anaming poem. I loved this one. I thought it was great. What is your secret? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was soooo good!! I LOVE IT!! hehehe i love the flow... the rhyming. very nice. ~*Valerie*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Master, You have such talent I absolutly love all of your poetry I have read to date. Keep on posting you have wonderful words of wisdom. Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda |
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