Teen Poetry #4 |
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fear of the future |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Dreading the moment when it becomes time when all my fears come true when all of the uncertainties become a horrific reality wishing for more time to cherish with tender love every hug every kiss every breath every enchanting word those beautiful eyes they're my salvation my quiet place you're my salvation my love I couldn't do it with out you heading down a path of lonely days and tear-filled nights after we say good bye both of us wondering what will come of us if the time and distance will tear us apart the pain the tears bittersweet only time can tell my love how both of us will feel when you come back to me or when you just come back the only certainty the only thing we know for sure is the love we share it's unconditional it's changed us in tremendous ways so babe, I'm telling you I LOVE YOU and my heart will ALWAYS belong to you and only you so when you come back to me my soulmate I'm here waiting missing you every second of every day keep yourself safe and come back to me!! ~*~To my dearest christopher upon his leaving to join the Marines...I LOVE YOU and come back to me safely!! the look in your eyes when we make love will be forever etched in my heart and will remain in my dreams forever...until you come back to me. thank you so much for the last year...happy anniversary babe~*~ "Tell me why you cry" |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
LOVELY!!! What a sweet poem, just in time for V's Day. ^_^ It is heartbreaking that your soulmate is off to the marines. Keep him close to your heart, and never forget that look in his eyes. ~_^ Thanks so much for sharing. This is so lovely! It made me think of someone. Great job! -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Oh Jess ![]() be strong, ok? This is defenitely your most heart felt poem you know I'm here when you need to talk |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Wow... what a teary-eyed poem. I wish i can find someone like that, all i get are sarcastic girls who dont care... but thats my own little problem. I hope that everything comes true for you, keep rollin'. Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nice poem here.......Good luck with love and I hope you stay together for a long time ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can't believe they're missing this. This is a very powerful poem. This is a perfect example of pouring your heart out So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
A little late, but I love this poem! It's great! It's so full of emotion, and I felt it all. Wondefully done. *Click* Into my library.. great job. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Way to let your emotions out, you did a really good job on this one ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I love this poem! I've had a few distance relationships, and they can be very strong. I wisht eh best to the two of you. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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