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TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2001-02-14 01:25 PM

This time it is kinda different cause this ina't my style usually...I just have to say...man I miss this place!

I look at the world
like many times before,
but this time it's different.

I smell sents
that through my windows pour,
but this time it's different.

I dpeak words
for poelpe to hear,
but this time it's different.

I hear sounds
to my heart so dear,
but this time it's different.

I feel with my heart and soul
and know what's my goal
but this time it's different.

This time...
I look at the world with rage,
smell the breath of death in the air,
speak words with hate and hear anger
that I never could feel was there.

I'm lost and angry but sad too
but this time it's different
cause I don't know what to do.

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-14 05:36 PM

I'm sorry you feel this way, but anger is not gonna help you figure things out. Very emotional poem. i really like it a lot. thanks for the share. i hope you figure things out.....

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2001-02-14 11:32 PM

hmm..i know how you feel. almost like the whole world's constantly picking at your flaws and never failing to remind you of them >: yepyep..kno the feeling

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-15 07:14 PM

I know how you feel here on this one. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2001-07-03 04:10 PM

"This time...
I look at the world with rage,
smell the breath of death in the air,
speak words with hate and hear anger
that I never could feel was there."

Its crazy isnt it?
Many have talked about LOVE as...
something they never before could have felt what was there.. something that brings them unto a new understanding when they look upon the world...
You talk about HATE in the same way...
i see great beauty in this poem here
I love this poem because it kinda is like the mirror of a love poem!!
and the coolest thing about it is you cant tell which way its going (happy or sad) until its right near the end!!

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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